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Endless

Lighting
Endless Rain
Pounding on my doorway
Waiting to get in

Thunder
Rumbling Noises
Running up my street
Trying to knock me down

Rain
Effortless Drops
Soaking through my roof
Engulfing all humanity

Screams
Shrieking Cries
Coming from below
Never coming back
©2009 ~Garra4evr
:icongarra4evr:

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If you can tell, this poem has a beat to it. It's hard to explain, but the way you read it, and if you read it correctly, you'll hear the beat in it, which is why this one is probably my favorite.

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I
LOVE
THIS
ONE
<3

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Sasuke: *grinning he tightens his arms around Naruto* Do you feel the love dobe?
Naruto: Your Love *cough choke* hurts..!
:icongarra4evr:
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Thank you, my koibito!!! this is actually my favorite ~<3

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>////< yep

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Sasuke: *grinning he tightens his arms around Naruto* Do you feel the love dobe?
Naruto: Your Love *cough choke* hurts..!
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this one deserves a cookie!
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Heaven's not a place that you go when you die
It's that moment in life when you actually feel alive
So live for the moment
And take this advice, live by every word
Love is just a hoax so forget anything that you have heard
~The Tide-The Spill Canvas
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~<3333
Thank you, Jess!!! : D

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Oh this one is AWESOME I like it b/c it's different
but a different kind of poetic use. :]

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And it's happened once again
I'll turn to a friend
Someone that understands
Sees through the master plan

But everybody's gone
And I've been here for too long
To face this on my own
Well I guess this is growing up
-Blink 182-
:iconje-c-kuh13:
welcomies!

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Heaven's not a place that you go when you die
It's that moment in life when you actually feel alive
So live for the moment
And take this advice, live by every word
Love is just a hoax so forget anything that you have heard
~The Tide-The Spill Canvas
:icongarra4evr:
haha,t hanks so much, Carry! I really like it too ~<3

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u r w311c03!!!!!

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And it's happened once again
I'll turn to a friend
Someone that understands
Sees through the master plan

But everybody's gone
And I've been here for too long
To face this on my own
Well I guess this is growing up
-Blink 182-

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