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7 minutes in heaven Naruto style!!! ^,^


short intro.
Sakura called you and asked if you wanted to come to her party. They were about to play 7 minutes in heaven. Of course you said yes, and rushed over there. You decided to go first and pulled out a slip with a number on it. Who'd you get?










You got one! "Number one?" You call out, and Shikamaru stands up lazily. You lightly blush. You've always thought he was cute, and loved how smart he was. You sighed contently as he held your hand and guided you to the closet. As soon as you both were in, Sakura closed the door and yelled out "Your seven minutes start now!!" You look around and see nothing but what seemed to be pink clothing; you can barely see.
"Shikamaru?" you whisper, and suddenly feel a warm breath on the back of your neck. You turn around and look at shikamaru, blushing furiously.
"_______, are you okay? You seem don't have to-" he started, but was cut off by something soft being pressed against his lips. And that something was you deciding to be the dare devil and kiss him in mid-sentence. You rap your arms around his neck while his hands wander down to your waist. You tilt your head to deepen the kiss when you feel something brush against your lower lip, and realize it was Shikamaru's tounge. He wanted access, but you denied, wanting to see what he would do. One of his hands drifts up your stomach and starts rubbing your breast, making you moan softly enough for him to hear. He takes the chance and slips his tounge into your mouth, and you do the same. You both explore each other's mouths until your tongues meet and start playing a game of tag. The next thing you know, you're on the ground, grabbing each other's shirt, trying to take them off. That is, until Shikamaru spoke up.
"What a drag...." he sighed, getting up from the floor.
"What......I-I thought..." You whispered when he tilted your chin so he could look into your eyes.
"Not about that...our seven minutes are almost up.....but if you want, meet me at the forest after the party so we can finish this" he said seductively, winking right when Sakura opened the door yelling out "Time's up!!" You both walk out the closet hand in hand, receiving a menacing glare from Temari as she walked up to the hat.

After the party, you go to the forest to see shikamaru staring at the stars. You two pick up where you left off and end up staying underneath the bright night sky, watching the stars.
"_______..........will you be my girlfriend?" he asks, and you answer with a tiny squeal of delight and a soft, passionate kiss on the lips.You guys have been going out for about 5 months now, and are inseparable!


You look at the slip of paper and call out number two. To your delight, Sasuke stands up and walks into the closet. The only downside is that Sakura looks like she's about ready to punch you, but everyone holds her back long enough for you to run into the closet and lock it on the inside, without Sasuke noticing, of course. You can barely make out his figure sitting on the farther side of the closet, looking at you with the familiar red eyes everyone knows about. He motions for you to come sit down, and you do, but right when you're about to sit, he grabs your waist and pulls you down so you're sitting on his lap. You're noses are touching, and your thankful that there weren't any lights so he could see your fully red face.
"You know I've always cared about you, but I can't let anyone know. This is our chance, so make the best of it. I know I will" The Uchiha said in a very sexy voice right before he pulled you closely into a rough but passionate kiss. You moaned and felt something press against your knee. 'What the.....' you think, and look down to see a small bulge in Sasuke's pants. You're eyes widen as you realize that he must really like you, so you take his advice and make the best of it, because it might not last. You put your hands on his chest and rub them up and down slowly, making him moan this time. One of his hands pressed against the small of your back, while the other started rubbing your behind. You gasped, and he slipped his tounge inside, making you moan even louder than before. But maybe a little too loud, because at that very moment, the door was knocked down by a rampaging Sakura, but she fell flat on the floor when she saw Sasuke glaring at her with a look that said 'do you mind?!'. You both walked out of the closet, hands enter twined, and have been together ever since. (that's 7 months)

You look and see that the number is 3.....with a....paw print? "Who's is this?" You ask, and Kiba stands up shyly, Akamaru by his side, wagging his tail. He hands the pup to Sakura and walks into the closet. You blush while looking at Hinata, seeming a little sad that you got him and she didn't. You felt really bad and went into the closet frowning. "Kiba?" You ask, seeing the red marks on his cheeks slowly disappear behind the forming blush.
"We don't have to do this......" He whispered, his voice shaking.
"I know that we don't...and I's just that...I can't. Mostly because I would feel bad....for Hinata" You said, sitting down next to him, twiddling your hair in between your fingers.
"Hinata? Why would you feel bad for her? She likes Naruto...." He said sadly, looking away from me to try to conceal his reddening blush.
"Is that what you really think?"  You ask, lightly touching his arm, making him look at you. " If you do, you're almost as clueless as Naruto." you chuckled.
" mean, she likes me? Then how do you explain why she always faints when he's around?!" he yelled, loud enough for Sakura and everyone else to hear outside.

Sakura: what did he just say?!
Sasuke: I don't know, but I think they're talking about you, Naruto.
Naruto: Me? But they're talking about two people! So who else?
Shikamaru: well, they're talking about someone who faints around Naruto, so just use your heads for once.....I'm not telling*looks at Hinata with sympathy*
Hinata: *looks down, glances at Shikamaru, and smiles while blushing a lot*

"Well, have you ever noticed that you're always around when she faints?! YOU'RE the reason! She doesn't want to act like a fool around you because she likes YOU, not Naruto! God, you're really blind sometimes, you know that!?" You yell at him, now standing up, putting your hands on your hips.
"Wow...I can't believe I didn't realize this......Thanks, _____, you're a really good friend" Kiba said, smiling an standing up.
"You're welcome, now get out there!" You said, filling with excitement for Hinata.
"Um....I can't"
"Sure you can! Come on, I'll be right next to you!"
"That's not why I can't......"
".......why not then?"
"The door is still locked from the outside, and we have three minutes left, so....." He said, looking at me like you were the clueless one, and you blushed, not believing that you forgot. Right then, Hinata unlocked the door and walked in, blushing so hard that she looked sun burned.
"H-Hinata!" Kiba said, turning as red as Hinata.
"E-everyone heard you outside......i-is it t-true, Kiba-kun?" She said, twiddling her fingers.
"I'll just let you two be alone...." You say, and walk out of the closet, locking it behind you.
"'d it go?" Naruto asked, looking at you with dumbfounded eyes.
"I don't know...they're working it out right-" You were cut off by a loud moan from Hinata. "That answer your question?"
"Y-yeah....." Naruto said, blushing a little bit.
"Okay, _____, since that didn't work out, you can pick again!"
You pick number 8. Scroll down and see who you got!

You call out 4, and someone you don't recognize stands up and walks over to the closet. "Who is he?" You ask Sakura, and she just shrugs and says "Figure it out". You walk into the closet after going through all of the people that you knew through your head and you STILL hadn't figured out who this stranger was. Once you were inside, he was sitting down on the opposite wall, looking at you with familiar eyes.
"So....are you ready?" He asks you, and starts to stand up.
"Um.....well, not really. But if you don't I know you?" You ask, embarrassed to be asking him such a stupid question.
"I have a better question; can I borrow your makeup?" He asks, raising his eyebrows at you.
"Uhhhh......sure?" you say, and hand him your purple eyeshadow. He turns around and starts smearing it on his face, and you can't help but have a puzzled look on your face. That is, until he turns around and you realize it was Kankurou! "Oh my gosh, Kankurou?! That was you?! I've never seen you without makeup on before!" You practically scream, and he just smirks as he grabs a shirt to wipe off the makeup.
"Well, I didn't expect you to one except Gaara, Temari, and Lee have seen me without makeup on before"
"Oh.....well....I think you're pretty cute with it on....but really hot with it off..." You say, blushing again and leaning towards him. He tries to back away a little bit(he was still trying to take off the makeup) but remembers he's against a wall.
"Can you please....wait until I'm done...?" He whispers, looking at you with pleading eyes.
"No" you pounce on him and you both fall on the floor with a loud thump, and hear Naruto yell outside "WHOA, THEY'RE GETTING BUSY!!!!" while everyone erupted with laughter. You giggled and put your hands to his chest and lay there for a little, listening to his breathing becoming more calm, softer with every second. Kankurou tossed the shirt aside when he finished wiping off the rest of the eye shadow, and turns to you. The puppeteer puts his hands on your back and lifted you up a little, so you two were at face level. He leans in and kisses you softly and tenderly, making sure not to move on until your comfortable. You removed your hands from his chest and put them on his cheeks, rubbing them with your thumbs. He moans softly, and right when he was about to move one (wink wink), Sakura busts open the door and yells out "LET SOMEONE ELSE GO NOW!!!! TAKE THIS UPSTAIRS, LOVEBIRDS!" You two just glare at her and walk up the stairs and continue for the rest of the night.

You look at the slip of paper in your hand and before you can even read the number, Shino stands up and walks into the closet, signaling his fly to follow him. You walk inside after him and sit down next to the door. You didn't like Shino that much, but it's not like you thought he was weird or anything. You just weren't good friends with him and all.
"Look, I know you think I'm creepy and stuff, so if you don't want to, we don't have to do anything...." He said, averting his gaze from you to the clothes on the racks.
"Shino, who ever told you that I thought you were creepy was wrong. I don't think anything like that of you. We just don't talk much, so...." You start, but stop when you realize he took his shades off, revealing the most gorgeous eyes that you have ever seen.  " took off your never take off your glasses...." You say in awe as he stared into your eyes as you did the same. He walks over to you and places a hand on your cheek.
" really mean all that?" He asks, his face beginning to turn pink.
"Y-yeah......why would I lie to you?" You say in almost a whisper, and right as he leans down to kiss you, Sakura opens the door and sees you two, then apologizes and tells you to hurry up. You and Shino decide to go somewhere else....somewhere more 'romantic'. Where that is, I'll let you decide ^^ And yes, you two kiss, and eventually make out, and eventually...yeah, you get the drift. ;P After that Shino turns to you and says "________, will you be my girlfriend?" You gladly accept and have been with him for three months now.


You pull out a small slip with the number 6. "Wonder who it could be..." you say to yourself as you call out the number. You see a Hyuuga member stand up and walk over to the closet, but when he opened the door, he stood and waited for you. "Thanks, Neji..." you giggled and walked in, Neji following after you. Sakura closed the door behind you and said "Don't take too long now, lovebirds!".
"SHUT UP!" You and Neji yell at ther at the same time.You look at eachother and you blush a little. Everyone knew that you liked Neji, but you weren't sure if he knew. But when he looked at you with those pale eyes, it was as if you were hypnotized. He edged closer to you and his face was inches away from yours.
"You know.......I always thought you were really pretty, _______..." He whispered, looking into your eyes.
"Y-you really think so?" You said, blushing just at the compliment.
"Yeah.....and look, I know you like me...heck, even clueless Naruto knows....."
" do....?" Your heart was beating faster and faster with every move he made, and you couldn't beleive what was hapenning. He grabbed your wrists and pulled you in gently for a kiss. Your eyes shot wide open and blushed a dark shade of red. You soon started to relax and melted into the kiss. His hands traveled down to your waist and pulled you closer to him, while your arms wrapped around Neji's neck. You both pull away for some air and look at eachother for what seemed like hours.
"________..........I was destiny....for us to be together..." He smiled shyly and kissed you lightly, and the next thing you know, your on the ground, but you hit your head with a 'thud'. "Oh my gosh, are you okay?! I'm so sorry!" Neji leans down and lifts your head up, forcing you to look at him.
"........I am now" You gigled again and pulled him down for another kiss. Right when things were heating up, Hinata opened the door slightly and peered inside. She saw you and Neji and started blushing furiiously and yelled out "S-sorry!!" And closed the door again. You both decide that you should take this somewhere else and walk out of the closet, Neji holding your waist. He looks at you with mischeivious eyes and you both know where to go. Where that is, I'll let your heart decide. You and Neji have been going out for 6 months. YAY!


You stick your hand inside of the hat and imediatley yelp. You had felt something rough brush against your hand, and whatever it was was stuck on your hand. "What the..." You whisper, but once you get a closer look, you notice that it's sand! "......Gaara.....please take your sand off of-AH!" You start, but the sand had grown bigger and pulled you into the closet, Gaara following closely behind. You heard everyone murmuring how you had gotten so unlucky, but you thought just the opposite. You always liked Gaara, ever since you met him when he was 7. He was always alone, and you were new to Suna, so you approached him in his small sandbox and asked if you could play with him. You had gotten along ever since, and you couldn't be any closer! But tonight was a little different.....Gaara was acting strangley, just throwing you into the closet like that....something was up. Was it possible that the sand master had feelings for you? 'No, that's impossible!' you thought to yourself. 'He doesn't like anyone or have feelings for anyone but himself! Why would he like me?' You kept thinking, and the more you thought about it, the more you realized you were the most probable person for him to like! Heck, being one of his best friends for over 9 years can really bring out a person, and you started to figure this out when his nose was touching yours. By then the sand had already released you, but Gaara was the one restraining you now. His hands were pushing your shoulders against the wall, and he was standing so close to you that you were certain that you could feel his body heat against your leg.
"________,do you like me?" He asked in a raspy whisper. 'So he does know....'
"Y-yes.....yes Gaara, I do, but-" You get cut off by sand, not lips, closing your mouth.
"You don't have to say anything...or be afraid of me....I can see it all in your eyes..." He said softly, and you saw his two, gorgeous sea green eyes looking at yours.
"Boot I'm noot afwaid of yoo!" You tried to tell him, but it came off very muffled, so you weren't sure if he understood that you had said 'But I'm not afraind of you!".
"Oh, yeah you are're afraid that I'm gonna do something bad to you...but the truth is....I would never want to hurt you...." Your eyes shot wide open when he told you this for two reasons. One, Gaara never told anyone something like that, telling someone how he really felt. And two, it was really ironic, because he was kinda hurting you right now. I mean, come on! Sand on your mouth, shoulders being pressed up against a hurts. But you didn't care, he was being honest for once, and he was with you. You forced his hands off of your shoulders and jumped forward to give him a hug, and when you did, you smiled, realizing that the sand had been taken off of your mouth. "w-what aare you d-doing?" Gaara asked, trembling a little at you touching him.
"This." You pressed your lips against his sand-colored ones, and his eyes grew big, but he slowly relaxed and closed his outlined eyes. All of a sudden, Temari opened the door and screamed at the sight of you making out with her brother. You both jumped and Gaara's sand picked both of you up and took you back to the rooftop, where you two gazed up at the stars and you fell asleep in his arms. You've been together for 6 1/2 months and lived happily in Suna.


"Gosh, I'm a little scared now...." you whispered to Sakura, as she handed you the hat. You picked a number and you got eight. "Number eight, in the closet, NOW" Sakura said for you, and you looked at her with a disbeleiving look. You turn back around to see Naruto get up and walk over to you. "Oh, this is gonna be joyous...." you muttered under your breath. But what nobody knew was that you were pretending. You and Naruto were rivals, but still really good friends, like hinm and Sasuke were, just that you were a girl. You occasionaly went to Ichiraku Ramen with him and helped him train, but other than that, you didn't really hand out much, though you helped him out whenever you could. He walks you over to the closet, but right before you get in, Sakura grabs your arm to tell you something. "Good luck with Naruto.....I know you knid of like him so......just don't get too busy in there" Sakura giggled and winked at me when she finally let me go inside.
"Soooo.......what was Sakura-chan telling you?" Naruto asked,l his hands behind his head in his usual lazy pose.
"Oh, nothing, just a little girl talk..." You say, and try to avert your gaze from Naruto's.
"Oh, what about? Me?" He started chuckling, and you could feel your face burning up.
"Yeah, right, Naruto, you're full of it" You joke and start to laugh too. You sit down against the closet door and Naruto comes over and sits next to you. His hand brushes against yours, and you pull away nervously. He looks over to you with his beautiful azure eyes, and you immediately fall into a trance.
"Um.....______....are you okay? Why are you looking at me like that?" He asks, cocking an eyebrow at you.
"Huh? Oh, no reason......your eyes are just so......." You say faintly, your face turning a darker shade of pink.
"So what? Blue?" He says, smirking at the statement.
"Yeah........" You say, and he slowly inches towards you, your lips finally making contact. 'Oh my god, it's finally hapenning!!!' You scream inside your head while you left your hands travel against his upper-body. Just then, you fall back and look up to see a pair of green eyes and pink hair in front of your face. "Sakura....." You groaned and slowly got up, with Naruto's assistance.
"Sakura-chan, you have the worst timing, you know that?" Naruto said, holding you close to him while you rubbed at the back of your head.
"Well sor-ry! It's not MY fault you have to be leaning on the door the entire time!" Sakura shouted, putting her hands on her hips.
"Whatever........some one Naruto, let's go..." You say, standing up slowly.
"Where?" Naruto asked with a puzzling look on his face.
"To space! No, Ichiraku's! Come on!!" You say, running at the door so Naruto would run after you. You had a great time at the ramen shop and you have never laughed more in your life. You have been going out for 4 1/2 months.

I HOPE YOU ALL LIKED IT!!!! :D Please comment!! ^^
OKAY! My computer was REALLY jacking up so i had to upload the entire thing again! Luckily, I had saved the enitre file, so yeah....It's exactly like the other one, just it's FINISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! boo yah!!! :DDDDDDD So yeah....anyways....enjoy!! and tell me who you got! ^^

Naruto and it's characters belong to Masashi Kishimoto
plotline and this 7 minutes in heaven belongs to me :)

oh, and PLEASE COMMENT!!! :D
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Ranger2323 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I have now (and before.) commented....
Hatokiro Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Sakura! That wasn't 7 minutes!
kierasanderman321 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu why kiba TT^TT hes one of my favorites
Hatokiro Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Mine too!!! Well... one of few but still!!!
Ranger2323 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
LizzySohma777 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2015
my number will always be seven. i almost died when i got gaara (My Fav)
Catsomething Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
Love :rainbowfrog: 
sebbyfan12 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Student Artist
Garra4evr Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's a pretty good question. Why is that?
Nikkiegirl9087 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Um...I just realized this as I read this for the billionth time:
at the end of number two it says
"have been together ever since. (that's 7 months)"
But no other number says 7 months!
So did they start dating at different times? or did they break up at some point?
Nikkiegirl9087 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014  Student General Artist
I thought Kakashi was in this...But it was so amazing and UGH! da feelz!
way2difficult Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
7 is my new lucky number :D
DanniTheComander Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
7 truly is a lucky number
hihianime Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I picked 3 then It said I had to go to 8
And im just like: fuck yeah
pockyluv42 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
iamdara Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
Good job!
SashaTweet Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013
I love this :-)
KatThePsycho Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
8 HELLZ YAH!nose bleed 
Akinata-Uchiha Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
GaarasCookieLove Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
GaarasCookieLove Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013
AHHH!!!! I GOT GAARA!! YAY!!! :love:
haru-ryuno Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so cool
i really like this :iconnarutoishappyplz:
bagtop Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I chose #3 and was surprised by the "twist" you added in there ;) Either way, I like them all and I love this piece
KooriTora Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013   General Artist
Gaara I love you my adorable red panda
good stories
zdoglion Featured By Owner May 28, 2013  Student Artist
Im like "7, because that's my lucky number ^_^" then I literally GASPED AND COVERED MY MOUTH when I found out it was Gaara, im like "NO WAY I GOT HIM!!" XD I was so surprised but super happy
iamdara Featured By Owner May 24, 2013
this is long.... BUT I READ IT ALL..... I'M A CAT!!!!!
Demonwolfgirl11 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
XDD I like DIS :D
Wolf-6-TailedFox Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I <3 the quiz, and I got Shino, I like Shino lol. U r doing a good job![link]
ReMMy1CHu Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
chose 5. must say i chose wisely <3
Garra4evr Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hoorah for you! <3
ReMMy1CHu Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
hey, weird question. would you mind if i turn this into a visual novel? I'll credit and such :iconbeggingplz:
Garra4evr Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, that's a first. I mean...if you want, I wouldn't mind, as long as there is credit given where credit is due~ And I'd also love to see the finished product.
Hikari-soru Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Let me give you a big cookie ! :iconbigcookieplz:
...wait i want it ! no it's for you hehehe damm it i wanted the cookie :iconhugtightplz:
Hikari-soru Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Student General Artist
:icontighthugplz: you are awsome :iconpukerainbowplz:
Sk8erchick21 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay! Neji ^//^
Garra4evr Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sk8erchick21 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^ WOO! :iconsupertighthugplz: :iconpervynejiplz:
XxRawrxX455 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I got Gaara~ I read all of them afterwards and they are all really well done ^^
Garra4evr Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! It's been so long since I wrote this, it's crazy to think people still read it. Glad you liked it!
XxRawrxX455 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD I did really enjoy it
candye251 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah both lucky number has never failed me yet and today doesn't seem like an exception either :iconlaughingplz: :iconbigsmileplz:
Garra4evr Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, good on you! Glad you enjoyed it~
MoonAngel92 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013
Just found this and I love it!!! I got 1, shikamaru!!! I love how he know when it's going to end haha, so smart ^_^
Garra4evr Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! It's been so long, sometimes I forget I even wrote this- but I'm glad people still like it! Personally, Shikamaru and Gaara were my favorites to write (:
alondra0 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012
omg i got Kankurou maybe not my first choice but really glad i got him tho lol hahahaahah :) O////O :) .
JeseniaVLopez Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If this ever happens to me it would be Gaara!! I love how you captured Gaara shyish side. I LOVE GAARA!<3
Haushinka-chan Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
I get Gaara and it was totally casual!! My destiny is him, what can I say? :P lol
DeathnoteChickx Featured By Owner May 13, 2012
:( waa i didnt get kibaa
I picked 8 and got Naruto... and 8 is my favorite number and Naruto is my favorite charater so is there a counidence? (Sorry if i miss spellded ^^;)
Garra4evr Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*coincidence, and that's alright xD That's cool! Maybe it is, maybe it isn't~
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